I am a student at Goldfields primary. This is a place where i will be able to share my learning with you.Please note...some work wont be edited
just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors.I would love your feedback,comments,thoughts and ideas.
Hi,Lachlan I really like your poem because it hooked me in. I wonder if your could add some writing about eating the deer.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
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